REFLECTION ON WHAT I NEED TO WORK ON FROM DRAFT 1

 

After getting some feedback about my first draft there are a few things that I need to do in order to make it better for my draft 2. 

Firstly my transitions and editing didn't quite fit in with what I wanted it to look like and it was all too serious because my music didn't reflect the audience in which I was trying to reach. As my target audience is young it is important that it reaches them and that they get a preferred reading of it (Stuart Halls reception theory) 

I also needed to add more cutaways and change the labels of my interviewees so that they are more clear and give more clarity.

I am hoping to upload my second draft by the end of this week, to then put my final one on by Monday or Tuesday at the latest.