FEEDBACK ON MAGAZINE

 This week I got my feedback for my magazine article. After speaking to my Media teacher I have decided to change a few things.... 

I am going to make my questions more bolder and more noticeable so that they can be identified easier by changing the colour of my questions too. I am going to also quote one of my most important quotes so that the attention is drawn more towards it so that peoples attention is diverted to it. I am also going to include the name of my documentary more as I forgot to put it in at all and this is highly important so that people remember the name of it.